Art 232 is a capstone course for Yavapai College fine artists, photographers and graphic designers. Student artwork demonstrates their understanding and competency in core foundation courses, electives, and Adobe software. This portfolio also demonstrates and supports the Associates of Arts degree or certificate and /or transfer.
Lauren McCrea and Laura Bloomenstein instructors.
INFRARED PHOTO: There is White and Black. But there is no interest for me. There needs to be texture and something to draw my interest. My eye goes to white and therefore I look at image and shoot out of the image when my eye goes to upper right and does not stop. I cannot stay in image long enough to find what should be interesting.
OLDEN TIMES: The white of the people draws me to them. But. All of the white in background and white of car to the right pulls my eye out of image and away from them. Notice that there is white in all four corners to pull the viewer away from people. Once that is better, then fix the blown out white of their costumes. We need to see them and what is interesting about them.
PEPSI BOTTLE: For me, image is all white and black and out of focus. Cannot see the Pepsi logo. Word Pepsi seems out of focus. This comment may be due to small size of the image.
Pepsi Bottle: To me this photo is more of an art piece. My eye is drawn to the shape of the bottle. The logo being out of focus speaks to me of the soda corporations being out of balance and filled with greed.
INFRARED PHOTO: There is White and Black. But there is no interest for me. There needs to be texture and something to draw my interest. My eye goes to white and therefore I look at image and shoot out of the image when my eye goes to upper right and does not stop. I cannot stay in image long enough to find what should be interesting.
ReplyDeleteOLDEN TIMES: The white of the people draws me to them. But. All of the white in background and white of car to the right pulls my eye out of image and away from them. Notice that there is white in all four corners to pull the viewer away from people. Once that is better, then fix the blown out white of their costumes. We need to see them and what is interesting about them.
PEPSI BOTTLE: For me, image is all white and black and out of focus. Cannot see the Pepsi logo. Word Pepsi seems out of focus.
This comment may be due to small size of the image.
Thank you for you constructive comments... the Pepsi machine shot was taken at night without a tripod, so yes, it is a bit blurry.
DeletePepsi Bottle: To me this photo is more of an art piece. My eye is drawn to the shape of the bottle. The logo being out of focus speaks to me of the soda corporations being out of balance and filled with greed.
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